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I copied the following words this evening from the poet William Carlos Williams. He is writing about the nature of poetry. "What most obviously distinguishes a piece of free verse from prose? It is the lining on the page. Even in the dreariest piece of writing that aspires to be free verse, the fact of its being set off in lines has some significance. It is significant, for one thing, because it pretends to be significant. That is, we have to dwell on the line as a unit, even if, by ordinary standards, we can find no unity. The very arbitrariness of the slashing across the prose sentence may be important. The line set off by this slashing, whatever its content, is brought into special focus; it makes a special claim on our attention by the mere fact of being set off; the words demand to be looked at freshly. And the whole composition makes, we may say, an important negative claimthe claim of not being prose. The only lines that are not absolutely arbitrary are those which have a certain intrinsic structure, the structure of a clause. The lining is so arbitrary that we have to see the poem in print before we have any notion that it is intended as a poem at all. But the very arbitrariness is the point. We are forced to focus our attention upon words and details, in a very special way, a puzzling way. Now the poem itself is about that puzzling portentousness that an object, even the simplest, like a red wheelbarrow, assumes when we fix attention exclusively upon it. Reading the poem is like peering at some ordinary object through a pin prick in a piece of cardboard. The fact that the pin prick frames it arbitrarily endows it with a puzzling and exciting freshness that seems to hover on the verge of revelation. And that is what the poem is actually about: "So much depends"but what, we do not know.

- Ron Price with thanks to William Carlos Williams, quoted in Ron Silliman, "The Desert Modernism,"  Electronic Poetry Review, No.4, 2002.

Ron Price

"YELLOW LEAVES"

What I leave on these pages

will be yellow leaves [1]

on their way to death,

ashen-with-emptiness,

denuded of all that is life.


I will also leave, too,

fresh grapes, white blossoms,

fruits of a consecrated joy

in these days of a new springtime

when the earth

had its earliest decades,

epochs it seemed

and I grew into a man

and became old.


© Ron Price
3 January 2003

 

 

Notes
[1] Pablo Neruda, Memoirs, Hardie St. Merton, trans. from Spanish, Condor Books, 1976, p.3.

 

 

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